Teacher

Hi [이름]!

Great job in your composition!

Please focus on the terms to use in your sentences.

There are also patterns that you should follow.

Take note of the corrections below.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

I think nowadays we can eat a lot of food.

>> I think we can eat different kinds of food nowadays.

Namely we can experience the diverse food and eat better than upon a time.

>> There is a variety of food that we can enjoy more nowadays than in the past.

Anyway we can diverse food and enjoy.
>> We can truly enjoy different kinds of dishes.
Anyway first, We have to exercise in order to solve the problem.

>> In order to solve the problem, first, we have to exercise.

We can run, swimming, tennis, soccer and baseball.
>> We can go running and swimming and play soccer and baseball.
Second, we should not eat a food after 7pm because We usually sleep at 10 pm.

>> Second, we should not eat anything after 7 p.m. because we usually sleep at 10 pm.

Maybe we may can’t digest.

>> It would be really difficult to digest food during that time.