Teacher Ali~~^^

2011-01-06 · 첨삭 강사 ali

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Continuing question list~~~ 4. There are some parents who work two-jobs to afford their children's private education expenses. Furthermore, there are parents who ask for school teachers to lessen homework to let their children work more at the private institutes. Explain the reason of these phenomena and provide solutions. 5. Tell us student-centered teaching methods. <Follow-up question> You mentioned ‘discussion class’as one of the student-centered classes. What are the procedures of discussion class and what should be cautioned? 6. What are the possible reasons for poor lifestyles or bad living habits of the students?

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Here are some more suggestions I have for very minimal revisions [이름]! Great job once again! 4. There are some parents who work two-jobs to afford their children's private education expenses. >>> Correct >>>OR: There are some parents who work double jobs to afford their children's private education expenses. Furthermore, there are parents who ask for school teachers to lessen homework to let their children work more at the private institutes. Explain the reason of these phenomena and provide solutions.>>> Correct >>> OR: Explain the reason for these phenomena and provide solutions.5. Tell us student-centered teaching methods.>>> Correct <Follow-up question>You mentioned 밺iscussion class 밶s one of the student-centered classes. What are the procedures of discussion class and what should be cautioned?>>> What are the procedures of a discussion class and what should be cautioned?6. What are the possible reasons for poor lifestyles or bad living habits of the students? >>> Correct

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