teacher I miss you :)

2013-05-23 · 첨삭 강사 Kristel

학생이 쓴 원문

i just arrived at home. The time in Korea is now pm12:20. And I have to wake up on 3:40 at least. So can you praise for me to wake up early? please? I hope I can do it! thank you and sorry for missing our class but I think we can talk on this evening bye~ Q1 - Wait here _until_ I get back. Q2 - I'll visit you Either could be used here I have time. Q3 - We'll be ready by the time you get back. Q4 - We'll leave Either could be used here we're ready. Q5 - I'll be glad when it's finished. Q6 - We must finish it Either could be used here we leave. Q7 - I hurt myself while I was playing tennis. Q8 - I'll give her the message the moment she arrives. Q9 - I'll be ready when she arrives. Q10 - I'll only pay you if you finish the work. Q11 - We turned back because it was raining. Q12 - Although_ I was tired, I managed to finish the work. Q13 - I was tired, but I managed to finish the work Q14 - I did it while he was being away.

강사 첨삭

Hi there!

Good morning,

It is nice to hear that you are back now.

I am getting all excited to have a class with you later.

I also want to thank you for sending your homework even if you are tired.

Well, have a great day!

See you later.^^

~~T. Nina~~

 i just arrived at home. 

>> I just arrived home.

The time in Korea is now pm12:20.

>> It is now 12:20 pm here in Korea.
And I have to wake up on 3:40 at least.

>> And I have to wake up at 3:40 at the latest.
So can you praise for me to wake up early? please?

>> So can you please praise me for waking up early?^^
I hope I can do it!

>> Correct
thank you and sorry for missing our class but I think we can talk on this evening bye~
>> I want to thank you as well and I have to  say sorry for missing our class but, I think we can talk this evening. Bye~
Q1 - Wait here _until_ I get back.

>> Correct
Q2 - I\'ll visit you Either could be used here I have time.
>> Correct

Q3 - We\'ll be ready by the time you get back.

>> Correct
Q4 - We\'ll leave Either could be used here we\'re ready.

>> Correct
Q5 - I\'ll be glad when it\'s finished.

>> Correct
Q6 - We must finish it Either could be used here we leave.

>> We must finish it before we leave.
Q7 - I hurt myself while I was playing tennis.

>> Correct
Q8 - I\'ll give her the message the moment she arrives.

>> Correct
Q9 - I\'ll be ready when she arrives.

>> Correct
Q10 - I\'ll only pay you if you finish the work.

>> Correct
Q11 - We turned back because it was raining.

>> Correct
Q12 - Although_ I was tired, I managed to finish the work.

>> Correct
Q13 - I was tired, but I managed to finish the work.

>> Correct
Q14 - I did it while he was being away.

>> Correct

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