teacher I was on a vacation.
학생이 쓴 원문
1. Chinese is a difficult language to learn.
2. the general's army attacked the city at night.
3. I like to play a basketball.
4. My parents gave me a basketball for my birthday.
5. She is the prettiest girl in the school.
6. I have an idea! Let's go bowling.
7. I have borrowed money from her before.
8. My first apartment was on Orange Street.
9. the dress she is wearing is blue.
10. He is a real gentleman.
Teacher, I was on my vacation
I was really busy last week days,
So I submitted some documents to admit my vacation.
I think I deserve it, but my boss didn't
he called me and asked me that Is there any special reason for vacation?
(It means boss want me not to go vacation.)
and he said In my case, I used only two vacations!
I was really embarrassed.
He want to me to stay because he didn'y use many vacation.
I think using vacation is depended on one's position.
I'm not the boss of this society, so It is unfair that he want me to stay.
do you think I was wrong?
강사 첨삭
Good morning!
How was your vacation?
I can sense that you are still thinking about it deeply. Well, in my opinion, we do have our personal reasons for applying for a vacation and the like.
Your boss simply stated his opinion.
Maybe we can still talk about this in class, if you like.
And regarding your homework, you did a good job! You only missed one item, so keep it up!
_T.Nina^^
1. Chinese is a difficult language to learn.
>> Correct [no article]2. the general\'s army attacked the city at night.
>> Correct3. I like to play a basketball.
>> no article4. My parents gave me a basketball for my birthday.
>> Correct5. She is the prettiest girl in the school.
>> Correct6. I have an idea! Let\'s go bowling.
>> Correct7. I have borrowed money from her before.
>> Correct8. My first apartment was on Orange Street.
>> Correct9. the dress she is wearing is blue.
>> Correct10. He is a real gentleman.>> Correct
Teacher, I was on my vacation
>> Correct
>> OR: Teacher, I was on vacation.I was really busy last week days,
>> I was really busy last week.
>> I was really busy for the past weekdays.So I submitted some documents to admit my vacation.
>> I submitted some documents to apply for my vacation.I think I deserve it, but my boss didn\'t
>> I think I deserve it but my boss didn\'t agree to it.
>> OR: I think I deserve it but my boss didn\'t approve it.he called me and asked me that Is there any special reason for vacation?
>> He called me and asked me if there\'s a special reason for my vacation.(It means boss want me not to go vacation.)
>> It means that my boss does not want to allow me to go on a vacation.and he said In my case, I used only two vacations!
>> Correct
>> OR: And he said, \"In my case, I only used \"two vacations\".I was really embarrassed.
>> CorrectHe want to me to stay because he didn\'y use many vacation.
>> He wants me to stay because he didn\'t go on many vacations.
>> OR: He wants me to stay because he wasn\'t able to go on a vacation.I think using vacation is depended on one\'s position.
>> I think going on a vacation depends on one\'s position.I\'m not the boss of this society, so It is unfair that he want me to stay.
>> I\'m not the boss of this society, so it is unfair that he wants me to stay.do you think I was wrong?
>> Correct
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