teacher Im on a vacation
학생이 쓴 원문
1. Will you be _at home today?
2. He is never late. He always comes _on time.
3. How many students are _in_ your class?
4. The teacher wrote something _on_ the board.
5. Many people work _in_ this building.
6. I will meet you _at_ 7:00 PM.
7. Let's meet _on_ Wednesday.
8. I am going to Japan _in_ seven days. a) at b) in c)on
9. I met John _in_ my friend's party.
10. She was sitting _on_ her car.
When I arrived home about 13:00, My grandmother welcomed me.
she gave me a meal.
Because My parents are both teacher, they don't exist in home until evening.
I took a nap. I really enjoyed my time.
When I woke up, I thought I need a time to repair my car and computer.
the location of a car service center was not complicate,
It was not difficult to find the center.
The problem occured to my car was velocity sensor error.
a tender michanic solved the problem.
and the computer was also repaired.
강사 첨삭
Hi there!^^
Thank you for doing your homework and for expressing your thoughts here.
I\'m so happy to hear about it.
Anyway, please go over the corrections.
Have a great day!
See you!^^
~T. Nina~
1. Will you be _at home today?
>> Correct!
>> OR: Will you be at home today?
2. He is never late. He always comes _on time.
>> Correct!
>> OR: He is never late. He always comes on time.
3. How many students are _in_ your class?
>> Correct!
>> OR: How many students are in your class?
4. The teacher wrote something _on_ the board.
>> Correct!
>> OR: The teacher wrote something on the board.
5. Many people work _in_ this building.
>> Correct!
>> OR: Many people work in this building.
6. I will meet you _at_ 7:00 PM.
>> Correct!
>> OR: I will meet you at 7:00 PM.
7. Let\'s meet _on_ Wednesday.
>> Correct!
>> OR: Let\'s meet on Wednesday.
8. I am going to Japan _in_ seven days. a) at b) in c)on
>> Correct!
>> OR: I am going to Japan in seven days.
9. I met John _in_ my friend\'s party.
>> I met John at my friend\'s party.
10. She was sitting _on_ her car.>> She was sitting in her car.
When I arrived home about 13:00, My grandmother welcomed me.
>> When I arrived home at around 13:00, my grandmother welcomed me.
she gave me a meal.
>> She gave me a meal.
Because My parents are both teacher, they don\'t exist in home until evening.
>> Because my parents are both teachers, they are not at home until evening.
I took a nap.
>> Correct!
I really enjoyed my time.
>> Correct!
When I woke up, I thought I need a time to repair my car and computer.
>> When I woke up, I thought I needed time to repair my car and my computer.
the location of a car service center was not complicate,
>> The location of the car service was not complicated.
>> Better: The location of the car service/ repair shop was not far from my place.
It was not difficult to find the center.
>> Correct!
The problem occured to my car was velocity sensor error.
>> The problem that occurred to my car was velocity sensor error.
a tender michanic solved the problem.
>> A young mechanic solved the problem.
and the computer was also repaired.
>> The computer was also repaired.^^
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