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2013-12-09 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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1. Will you be _at home today? 2. He is never late. He always comes _on time. 3. How many students are _in_ your class? 4. The teacher wrote something _on_ the board. 5. Many people work _in_ this building. 6. I will meet you _at_ 7:00 PM. 7. Let's meet _on_ Wednesday. 8. I am going to Japan _in_ seven days. a) at b) in c)on 9. I met John _in_ my friend's party. 10. She was sitting _on_ her car. When I arrived home about 13:00, My grandmother welcomed me. she gave me a meal. Because My parents are both teacher, they don't exist in home until evening. I took a nap. I really enjoyed my time. When I woke up, I thought I need a time to repair my car and computer. the location of a car service center was not complicate, It was not difficult to find the center. The problem occured to my car was velocity sensor error. a tender michanic solved the problem. and the computer was also repaired.

강사 첨삭

Hi there!^^ Thank you for doing your homework and for expressing your thoughts here. I\'m so happy to hear about it. Anyway, please go over the corrections. Have a great day! See you!^^ ~T. Nina~   1. Will you be _at home today?  >> Correct! >> OR: Will you be at home today?  2. He is never late. He always comes _on time. >> Correct! >> OR: He is never late. He always comes on time. 3. How many students are _in_ your class? >> Correct! >> OR: How many students are in your class? 4. The teacher wrote something _on_ the board. >> Correct! >> OR: The teacher wrote something on the board. 5. Many people work _in_ this building. >> Correct! >> OR: Many people work in this building. 6. I will meet you _at_ 7:00 PM. >> Correct! >> OR: I will meet you at 7:00 PM. 7. Let\'s meet _on_ Wednesday. >> Correct! >> OR: Let\'s meet on Wednesday. 8. I am going to Japan _in_ seven days. a) at b) in c)on >> Correct! >> OR:  I am going to Japan in seven days. 9. I met John _in_ my friend\'s party. >>  I met John at my friend\'s party. 10. She was sitting _on_ her car.>> She was sitting in her car. When I arrived home about 13:00, My grandmother welcomed me. >> When I arrived home at around 13:00, my grandmother welcomed me. she gave me a meal. >> She gave me a meal. Because My parents are both teacher, they don\'t exist in home until evening. >> Because my parents are both teachers, they are not at home until evening. I took a nap. >> Correct! I really enjoyed my time. >> Correct! When I woke up, I thought I need a time to repair my car and computer. >> When I woke up, I thought I needed time to repair my car and my computer. the location of a car service center was not complicate, >> The location of the car service was not complicated. >> Better: The location of the car service/ repair shop was not far from my place. It was not difficult to find the center. >> Correct! The problem occured to my car was velocity sensor error. >> The problem that occurred to my car was  velocity sensor error. a tender michanic solved the problem. >> A young mechanic solved the problem. and the computer was also repaired. >> The computer was also repaired.^^

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