Teacher Kelly!

2013-07-22 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hi Teacher Kelly. I have some questions about grammar. First, The city council will not grant approval for construction in cases where damage to the environment will be particularly severe. But, I don't know why the 'where' is inserted to this sentence. I think "the city council will not grant approval for construction in cases damage to the environment will be particularly severe." is a correct sentence. I'm very confused. If upper sentence (which use the word 'where') is right, could you explain me? Second, The stock broker told the investors about a safe investment plan that would secure their financial future. But, I don't know why the 'about' is inserted to this sentence. I think "The stock broker told the investors a safe investment plan that would secure their financial future."is a correct sentence. Because the verb 'tell' can have two objects. I'm very confused. Third, The restaurant offers a diverse menu that features a variety of European dishes. But,I don't know why the 'a' is inserted to this sentence. I think "The restaurant offers diverse menu that features a variety of European dishes." is a correct sentence. Because, diverse menu is a 'plural noun'. So, I think "a" can't be inserted to this sentence. I'm very confused...teacher! Please explain me more detail. If upper sentence is right, would you explain me the reason?? Good night!:)

강사 첨삭

Hello Melissa! Thank you for your composition. I hope that I was able to answer your questions. Just feel free to ask me if you have further questions. Have a great day!

~t. KELLY~

Hi Teacher Kelly. I have some questions about grammar.

>> Correct.
First, The city council will not grant approval for construction in cases where damage to the environment will be particularly severe.

>>  First, The city council will not grant an approval for construction in cases where damage to the environment will be particularly severe.

*** In this case, where refers \"to what situation, circumstance\". It shows where the plan/situation leads. 

But, I don\'t know why the \'where\' is inserted to this sentence.
>>  But, I don\'t know why \'where\' is inserted to this sentence.
I think \"the city council will not grant approval for construction in cases damage to the environment will be particularly severe.\" is a correct sentence.
>>  I think \"the city council will not an grant approval for construction in case damage to the environment will be particularly severe.\" is a correct sentence.

I\'m very confused.

>> Correct.

If upper sentence (which use the word \'where\') is right, could you explain me?

>> If the above sentence is right, could you explain to me.
Second, The stock broker told the investors about a safe investment plan that would secure their financial future.

>> Correct.

>> The word about in this sentence means of/concerning.

But, I don\'t know why the \'about\' is inserted to this sentence.

>>  But, I don\'t know why the word \'about\' is inserted to this sentence.

>>  But, I don\'t know why \'about\' is inserted to this sentence.

I think \"The stock broker told the investors a safe investment plan that would secure their financial future.\"is a correct sentence.

>> Correct.

Because the verb \'tell\' can have two objects. I\'m very confused.

>> Correct.
Third, The restaurant offers a diverse menu that features a variety of European dishes.
>> Correct.

*** Some nouns can be both countable and uncountable. For example, we say \"coffee\" meaning the product, but we say \"a coffee\" when asking for one cup of coffee.

But,I don\'t know why the \'a\' is inserted to this sentence.
>> Correct.

I think \"The restaurant offers diverse menu that features a variety of European dishes.\" is a correct sentence.

Because, diverse menu is a \'plural noun\'. So, I think \"a\" can\'t be inserted to this sentence.

>> Correct.
I\'m very confused...teacher!
>> Correct.
Please explain me more detail. If upper sentence is right, would you explain me the reason??
>>  Please explain to me more in detail. If the upper sentence is right, would you explain to me the reason??

Good night!:)

>> Correct.

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