Teacher Kelly!! I'm Melissa:)

2013-02-09 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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Hi:) Teacher Kelly! This letter too late..sorry.. I have to write this letter one more time, because of my computer's error. I went to hair salon earlier here.Bangs cut and dyed with the color of red wine. Oh, we're going to explain my dentis vist of yesterday, Originally, I have to extract two upper teeth, and one lower tooth,so totally three teeth, But yesterday, dentist just extract only two.(upper tooth, lower tooth, one by one)Reason for a little while I'll explain later. It was tooth transplant process. I have no permanent tooth.(only one in lower tooth.) So I have to extract that tooth which has no permanent tooth. And plant one of two upper teeth, on that spot. It's complex, wasn't it? But that process is less likely to succeed. So the dentis left the other upper teeth. But this process Is just one part of the calibration process. Total calibration period is a year and a half. But it was not that painful, cuz dentist was really kind:) Good night:) p.s.Happy New year

강사 첨삭

Hi there Melissa and happy new year to you too =) Well, thanks for such a nice composition here, I appreciate your efforts of putting in your thoughts, great job indeed =) Well, that was one trip to the dentist, kk. Have a nice vacation, see you, and have a nice new year with your family =) ~ T. Kelly =) Hi:) Teacher Kelly! >>> Correct This letter too late..sorry.. >>> This letter is too late..sorry..I have to write this letter one more time, because of my computer\'s error. >>> CorrectI went to hair salon earlier here.Bangs cut and dyed with the color of red wine. >>> I went to the hair salon earlier, I had my bangs cut and had my hair dyed with red wine.Oh, we\'re going to explain my dentis vist of yesterday, >>> Oh, I\'m going to explain my visit to the dentist yesterday. Originally, I have to extract two upper teeth, and one lower tooth,so totally three teeth, But yesterday, dentist just extract only two.(upper tooth, lower tooth, one by one) >>> Originally, I had to have my two upper teeth and one lower tooth extracted, but yesterday, the dentist only extracted two of them (one upper tooth and one lower tooth). Reason for a little while I\'ll explain later. It was tooth transplant process. >>> The reason for that I will have to explain later, it was atooth transplant process. I have no permanent tooth.(only one in lower tooth.) >>> I have no permanent tooth.(only one in my lower tooth.) So I have to extract that tooth which has no permanent tooth. >>> Correct And plant one of two upper teeth, on that spot. >>> And plant one of the two upper teeth, on that spot. It\'s complex, wasn\'t it? >>> Correct But that process is less likely to succeed. >>> Correct So the dentis left the other upper teeth. >>> Correct, just the spelling of dentist But this process Is just one part of the calibration process. >>> Correct Total calibration period is a year and a half. >>> CorrectBut it was not that painful, cuz dentist was really kind:) >>> But it was not that painful, cuz my dentist was really kind:)Good night:)>>> Correctp.s.Happy New year>>> >>> Correct, and happy new year to you too~!  

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