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Good morning Beautiful teacher Lorraine. ^^ hehe Ther are my interoduction for my interview. If you do mind could you check it? Hello, Firt of all, Thank you for giving me a chance to introduce my self. My name is [Name] Hwang. I'm graduated from Hankyung University with majoring in Horticulture. While I was in University, I've leraned to be an affectionate and warm-hearted person because we learned how to love and take care of plants. I personally think that plans are the same as humans since plante can't live and grow without concern, care, or love. These days, I'm intersted in learning languees. I've studied Japaness and Chiness as well as English. When I abroad I taught yoga to friends who are people from different countries. Learnigh Languages makes me more socialbe and approachable. Therefore I could got along with them and I had a great experience. Im looking fowrd to having my chance to dliver in flight service with my attentive care to my passengers.

Hello there my dear pretty [이름]! Thank you for writing a splendid essay in your composition board. I hope that you will continue on doing a great job in our class discussion. Anyway, I made some corrections on your sentences below. Please take a look and study. See you later! ~T. Lorraine ^^,   Good morning Beautiful teacher Lorraine. ^^>> Good morning beautiful teacher Lorraine. (Small letter) Thank you my dear^^, hehe Ther are my interoduction for my interview. >> Written below is my introduction for the interview. (Sentence Construction)If you do mind could you check it?>> If you don\'t mind, could you please check it? (Sentence Construction)Hello, Firt of all, Thank you for giving me a chance to introduce my self. >> Hello Sir/ Ma\'am! First of all, thank you for giving me this wonderful chance to introduce my self.  My name is [Name] Hwang.>> Correct! :) I\'m graduated from Hankyung University with majoring in Horticulture. >> I graduated from Hankyung University with major in Horticulture. (Sentence Construction)While I was in University, I\'ve leraned to be an affectionate and warm-hearted person because we learned how to love and take care of plants.  >> While I was still in the university, I\'ve learned to be an affectionate and a warm-hearted person because we were taught on how to love and to take care of plants. (Spelling, Sentence Construction) I personally think that plants are the same as humans since plants can\'t live and grow without concern, care, or love.>> Correct! Wonderful! :) These days, I\'m intrersted in learning languees.>> These days, I\'m interested in learning different languages. (Missing word, Spelling) I\'ve studied Japaness and Chiness as well as English.>> I\'ve studied the Japanese,Chinese and English languages. (Sentence Construction) When I abroad I taught yoga to friends who are people from different countries. >>When I was in abroad, I taught yoga to my friends who came from different countries and races. (Sentence Construction) Learnigh Languages makes me more socialbe and approachable. >> Learning various languages made me more sociable and approachable. (Sentence Construction) Therefore I could got along with them and I had a great experience.>> Hence, I was able to get along with them and I had a great experience. (Sentence Construction) Im looking fowrd to having my chance to dliver in flight service with my attentive care to my passengers. >>I\'m looking forward to have my chance of delivering my utmost care and service to my passengers. (Sentence Construction)