Teacher Nina

2013-05-22 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Teacher Nina! Yesterday I didn't have a class. So I'm sad. On Friday we will go to the school camp.So I did't meet you on Friday Teacher Nina! I'm sorry! Yesterday my campteam have a meeting. I did't want to go that meeting.Because I have to have a class.But my mother said,"school work is important!" So I went to the meeting.And..I'm really thank you. When you teached me about "My dream and my wish list" I have a good work on contest,Thank you very much^^

강사 첨삭

Hi there my dearest TOM^^ Thank you for sending me a composition today. Wow! Congratulations! I know that you did your best. I am so proud of you! Oh! I\'m gonna miss you on Friday. =c Let\'s talk about your camping in class! See you later! I am excited to see you later! Teacher Nina Here are my corrections for you: Yesterday I didn\'t have a class. So I\'m sad. >> I was not able to have the class yesterday so I felt sad.On Friday we will go to the school camp. >> On Friday, we are going to have a school camp. So I did\'t meet you on Friday Teacher Nina! I\'m sorry! >> So I will not be able to meet you on Friday. Teacher Nina, I\'m sorry. Yesterday my campteam have a meeting. >> My camp team had a meeting yesterday. I did\'t want to go that meeting.Because I have to have a class. >> I didn\'t want to attend the meeting because I have to attend the class. But my mother said,\"school work is important!\" >> Correct! OR >> But my mother said,\"School work is important!\"So I went to the meeting. >> Correct! And..I\'m really thank you.When you teached me about \"My dream and my wish list\" >> I am really thankful because you taught me about \"My dream and wish list.\".I have a good work on contest, >> I did a good job in the contest. Thank you very much^^ >> Correct!

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