Teacher Nina
학생이 쓴 원문
Teacher Nina!
Yesterday I didn't have a class. So I'm sad.
On Friday we will go to the school camp.So I did't meet you on Friday Teacher Nina! I'm sorry! Yesterday my campteam have a meeting. I did't want to go that meeting.Because I have to have a class.But my mother said,"school work is important!"
So I went to the meeting.And..I'm really thank you.
When you teached me about "My dream and my wish list"
I have a good work on contest,Thank you very much^^
강사 첨삭
Hi there my dearest TOM^^
Thank you for sending me a composition today. Wow! Congratulations! I know that you did your best. I am so proud of you! Oh! I\'m gonna miss you on Friday. =c Let\'s talk about your camping in class! See you later! I am excited to see you later!
Teacher Nina
Here are my corrections for you:
Yesterday I didn\'t have a class. So I\'m sad.
>> I was not able to have the class yesterday so I felt sad.On Friday we will go to the school camp.
>> On Friday, we are going to have a school camp.
So I did\'t meet you on Friday Teacher Nina! I\'m sorry!
>> So I will not be able to meet you on Friday. Teacher Nina, I\'m sorry.
Yesterday my campteam have a meeting.
>> My camp team had a meeting yesterday.
I did\'t want to go that meeting.Because I have to have a class.
>> I didn\'t want to attend the meeting because I have to attend the class.
But my mother said,\"school work is important!\"
>> Correct!
OR >> But my mother said,\"School work is important!\"So I went to the meeting.
>> Correct!
And..I\'m really thank you.When you teached me about \"My dream and my wish list\"
>> I am really thankful because you taught me about \"My dream and wish list.\".I have a good work on contest,
>> I did a good job in the contest.
Thank you very much^^
>> Correct!
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