Teacher, on the next monday, I have a test about English in school. So I\'m sorry, could you check g

2020-09-25 · 첨삭 강사 Rina

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It is about receipe what I want to cook. How to make tomato pasta. 1.First, prepare tomato sause, pasta noodles, 1 onion, 2~3 slice of bacons, salt and cheese 2. Put salt in the water in the pot. 3.When the water stops, put the noodles in and wait for 8 minutes. 4.Stir-fly onion and bacons in a pan while the noodles are cooked. 5.Add the sause together. 6. When the noodles are cooked, stir-fly them together. 7.Add some cheese and mix . 8. Put it in a plate at the end.

강사 첨삭

Hello again, Seong Hun!
I think you sent the homework twice~
It\'s okay~
If you have more questions, feel free to message me. Have a good weekend!

- T. Rina

1. It is about receipe what I want to cook.
>> It is about the recipe that I want to cook.

2. How to make tomato pasta.
>> CORRECT!

3.First, prepare tomato sause, pasta noodles, 1 onion, 2~3 slice of bacons, salt and cheese
>> First, prepare the ingredients. You will need: Tomato sauce, pasta, one onion, two to three slices of bacon, salt and cheese.

4. Put salt in the water in the pot.
>> Second, put water in a pot and add salt.

5.When the water stops, put the noodles in and wait for 8 minutes.
>> When the water boils, put the pasta in the pot and wait for eight minutes.

6.Stir-fly onion and bacons in a pan while the noodles are cooked.
>> Next, stir-fry the onion and bacon slices in a pan while the pasta is being cooked.

7.Add the sause together.
>> Then, add the sauce.

8. When the noodles are cooked, stir-fly them together.
>> When the pasta is cooked, stir-fry them together.

9.Add some cheese and mix .
>> CORRECT!

10. Put it in a plate at the end.
>> Lastly, put it on a plate and serve.

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