Teacher, on this wednesday, I have a test about English in school. So I\'m sorry, could you check
학생이 쓴 원문
It is writing 8 sentences that summery about real articles in Korea situation now. r 한국 방송사들이 쓴 실제 기사를 요약하여 나타낸 것이다
1. 119 Covid-19 Patients Added today.
2. There were 119 Covid-19 patients occured today.
3. It is mainly concerntrates in seoul and surrounding areas.
4. A new infection has recently occurred in the hospital
5. So, now is very emergency situation.
6. Especially, in fall, the number of people traveling increased.
7. Also, there is Halloween Day this week, so more patients may occur.
8. The government told the people to keep social distancing.
Please reply to a letter to me until tomorrow evening.
Thank you.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Seong Hun~
Here you go! :)
I hope this helps.
Take care and see you on Wednesday!
- T. Rina
1. It is writing 8 sentences that summery about real articles in Korea situation now.
>> It is to write 8 sentences that summarize real articles about Korea\'s situation now.
2. 119 Covid-19 Patients Added today.
>> It is to write 8 sentences that summarize real articles about Korea\'s situation now.
2. 119 Covid-19 Patients Added today.
>> 119 Covid-19 patients are added today.
3. There were 119 Covid-19 patients occured today.
>> There were 119 Covid-19 patients occurred today.
4. It is mainly concerntrates in seoul and surrounding areas.
>> It is mainly concentrated in Seoul and surrounding areas.
5. A new infection has recently occurred in the hospital
>> CORRECT!
6. So, now is very emergency situation.
>> So, now, it is an emergency situation.
7. Especially, in fall, the number of people traveling increased.
>> CORRECT!
8. Also, there is Halloween Day this week, so more patients may occur.
>> Also, it is Halloween this week, so more patients may occur.
9. The government told the people to keep social distancing.
>> CORRECT!
10. Please reply to a letter to me until tomorrow evening.
>> Please reply to me until tomorrow evening.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.