Teacher rose

Thank you for your message, [이름]~

Let me explain the following sentences:

Dear rose,
>>Dear [Name], 
I have a question. Thank you for your lecture for today.
>>CORRECT!
In the last 1 minute for today\'s lecture, 
You said that......\"I think that this is a great policy. By the government, I just hope that the future employers of be(??) grauate will not abuse them because they are young something like that.\"
>>In the last minute of today\'s lecture, you said, ......\"I think that this is a great policy by the government, I just hope that the future employers of these graduates will not abuse them because they are young something like that.\"
 You work overtime. and then suddenly the students couldn\'t study anymore. or They will give just some amount.. I hope it will be better\"
>>They work overtime and then suddenly the students couldn\'t study anymore, or they will give just some amount [salary, I meant] I hope it will be better.\"

(I mean, I hope that their future employers would not abuse them or make them work overtime. In other words, I hope that they will be treated well.)
Are these sentenses correct? 

>>Are these sentences correct? 
Thank you~
>>CORRECT!
Best regards,

>>CORRECT!
 Ji-Hun Yoon

>>CORRECT!