Teacher Rose,
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강사 첨삭
Thank you for asking, [이름]^^
I think I stated my opinions as fragments, so it seemed disorganized.
I meant:
I am very happy that finally, Saudi Arabian women can take the wheel.
It might seem very common in South Korea (your country).
However, there\'s a huge gap between men and women in Middle Eastern countries.
Have a good day.
Dear teacher rose,
>>Dear Teacher Rose,
Thank you for your teaching for today.
>>CORRECT!
I have a question.
>>CORRECT!
Today, in the last minutes, you told me that...
\"It is something that I am happy for. Women can.....you can see on the photo. Women take to the wheel. ............\"
>>Today, in the last minutes, you told me that, \"It is something that I am happy for. Women can... you can see on the photo. Women can take the wheel. It looks very common in your country, but in Saudi Arabia, and Middle Eastern nations, the difference between men and women is really huge\"
=> I think this sentence is not correct....
>>I don\'t think this sentence is correct.
Please give me your opinion.
>>CORRECT!
Thank you.
>>CORRECT!
Best regards,
Ji-Hun Yoon
>>CORRECT!
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