Teacher rose,

2018-10-22 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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I am sorry.... I will try to ask one quesion about today's lecture(10.22) because the characteristic number of capacity is just 1,000. In the last moments on 22th of Oct, I mentioned about this sentence. However, the countries which focus on the quality of investment are just waiting for donation rather than taking the donation seriously and taking the responsiblity => Is not correct expression? because it is about the countries which emphasize on the quantity of investment as far as know.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for asking, [이름]~

I just hope I answered the question accurately.

I am sorry....

>>CORRECT!
I will try to ask one quesion about today\'s lecture(10.22) because the characteristic number of capacity is just 1,000.

>>I will try to ask one question about today\'s lecture(10.22) because the limit of characters is just 1,000.
In the last moments on 22th of Oct, I mentioned about this sentence.
>>In the last moment on 22th of Oct, I mentioned this sentence.
However, the countries which focus on the quality of investment are just waiting for donation rather than taking the donation seriously and taking the responsiblity =>

>>[I THOUGHT I HEARD \"QUANTITY\"] However, the countries which focus on the QUANTITY of investment are just waiting for donation rather than taking the donation seriously and taking the responsibility .

Is not correct expression? because it is about the countries which emphasize on the quantity of investment as far as know.

>>Isn\'t it a correct expression? Because it is about the countries which emphasize on the quantity of investment as far as I know.

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