Teacher Rynn

2019-03-18 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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Teacher Rynn Thank you for your teaching. I have a question. Today, at the last moment, you told me about \"The educational system about English in Korea\". You told me that..... \"is it a strategy? it it a curriculum? .....then if it is a ........ problem, then They have to do something about it.\" it it right? please correct this sentence that you were saying in today\'s class. Thank you!~~

강사 첨삭

[이름],

We were talking about the English proficiency of Koreans last Friday so I asked your opinion if the problem is the English curriculum or is it your educational system? Or probably the teaching strategy. If that is the case, then the ministry of education should deal or do something about this.

~Lynn

Thank you for your teaching.
>> Thank you for teaching me today.
I have a question.
>> correct!
Today, at the last moment, you told me about \"The educational system about English in Korea\".
>> correct!
You told me that..... \"is it a strategy? it it a curriculum? .....then if it is a ........ problem, then They have to do something about it.\"
>> I asked your opinion if the problem is the English curriculum or is it your educational system? Or probably the teaching strategy. If that is the case, then the ministry of education should deal or do something about this.
 It it right? please correct this sentence that you were saying in today\'s class.
>> correct!
Thank you!~~

>> correct!

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