Teacher\'s Day
학생이 쓴 원문
Theme: [ESSAY] How do you celebrate Teacher\'s Day at school?
We usally don\'t celebrate teacher\'s day at school.
But I usally give my teacher a small present like some sweets.
Sometimes teachers don\'t get them but usally, they get our present and say \"Thank You.\".
And sometimes I visit my kindergarten teachers and talk with them.
My conclusion is, I like all of my teachers! ^ - ^ : D : P : p : )
강사 첨삭
Here\'s your second edited homework, Clair.
See you on Wednesday!
Cheers,
Jean~~
Theme: [ESSAY] How do you celebrate Teacher\'s Day at school?
We usally don\'t celebrate teacher\'s day at school.
But I usally give my teacher a small present like some sweets.
>> We normally don\'t celebrate teacher\'s day at school but I usually give my teachers a small present like some sweets.
Sometimes teachers don\'t get them but usally, they get our present and say \"Thank You.\".
>> Sometimes, teachers refused to accept them but most of the time, they get our gifts and say, \"Thank You.\".
And sometimes I visit my kindergarten teachers and talk with them.
>> or: Also, there are times that I visit my kindergarten teachers and chat with them.
My conclusion is, I like all of my teachers! ^ - ^ : D : P : p : )
>> or: In conclusion, I like all of my teachers!
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