<Teacher [이름]'s class rules> 1. listen when someone is speaking
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Hi there!
How\'s your day?
I hope that you are having a good one.
Giving rules to kids at an early age is a good training for them already to be disciplined.
Following simple classroom rules will make them learn how to obey and respect it.
Good thing that your daughter has learned it even when she was young.
Anyway, see you later!
T. Nina ^^
<Teacher [이름]\'s class rules>
>> correct!
>> OR: Teacher [이름]\'s class rules:
1. listen when someone is speaking
>> correct!
2. raise your hand to speak
>> Raise your hand when you want to speak.
3. follow directions quickly
>> correct!
4. be a caring friend
>> correct!
5. always do your best work
>> Always do your best at work.
About making my class rules, I memorized my daughter.
>> I am observing my daughter when I have to make my class rules.
Because to my daughter, I am a teacher.
>> Because of my daughter, I became a teacher.
I think it is very important to let kids know to many social rules.
>> I think it is very important to let kids know many social rules.
And parents and teacher \'s role is weighty to them.
>> And the parents\' and teachers\' roles have to be weighed by them.
We are their only mirror to see the whole worlds.
>> We are their mirror in seeing the whole world.
kids can see the whole worlds by us.
>> Kids can see the world through us.
So I want th let they know Do or Don\'t.
>> So I want to let them know the Do\'s and Don\'ts.
Even my daughter, she knew all the class rules when she was 3 years old.
>> Even my daughter was able to know all the class rules when she was 3 years old.
She knew if she dosen\'t listen her\'s teacher\'s saying, she got angry and makes teacher unhappy.
>> She knew if she doesn\'t listen to her teacher\'s advice, she will get angry and it will make her teacher unhappy.
Also group consciousness is very important and have influence on the other kids, that\'s why they readily obey teacher´s elders more than their parents.
>> Also, the group consciousness is very important and it has influence on other kids, that is why they readily obey their teachers or elders more than their parents.
So I want to make a class rules for my students, so that let them to know DO or Don\'t.
>> So I want to make the class rules for my students, because I want to let them know the Do\'s and Don\'ts.
Than would be make a good class atmosphere to study and play.
>> Then it would be a good class atmosphere to study and play.
Not to much, but satisfy all of students and teacher\'s desires necessary.
>> Even if it\'s not that much, it will satisfy all the students\' and teachers\' desire of necessity. ^^
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