Teaching
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello sir,
A warm Wednesday to you!
Had you taught in an academy or a university perhaps? If not, would you like to be a teacher sir? Teaching is one of the noblest profession. I think it is as important as other jobs. But as one of my former teacher often say: if an engineer does a poor job in building a bridge, some people may die. If a doctor does a malpractice one person will die. But if a teacher teaches something wrong to his/her students, that will be for life. Do you agree? See you later sir!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
I think teaching is fascinating job.
>>I think teaching is a fascinating job.
Teaching is one of the oldest job since ancient times has been fo far.
>>Teaching is one of the oldest jobs, since ancient times there were teachers.
Teaching is very important.
>>correct!
Teachers should be identified exactly what learners is needed.
>>Teachers should identify exactly what learners needed.
Teacher is not just knowledge transfer.
>>Teaching is not just knowledge transfer.
A teacher provides knowledge and should teachs good character.
>>A teacher provides knowledge and should teach good character too.
A teacher has to see how s student understands, and then teach the student in a proper manner in which they can grasp.
>>A teacher has to see how a student understand and then teach the student in the proper manner which they can grasp.
Anybody can apply for teacning, but nobody can be done it.
>>Anybody can apply for teaching but not everyone can do it.
A teacher is a valuable and meaningful job.
>>Teaching is a valuable and meaningful job.
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