Teamwork hobbies
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I don\'t like hobbies requiring teamwork. I\'m an introverted person. So I like hobbies to enjoy time alone. For example taking a walk, riding a bike and reading books. But when I was younger, I joined teamwork sports such as baseball or football.
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I don\'t like hobbies requiring teamwork. I\'m an introverted person. So I like hobbies to enjoy time alone.
>> or: I\'m not particularly fond of group hobbies due to my introverted personality. That\'s why I prefer activities that can make me enjoy my alone time.
For example taking a walk, riding a bike and reading books. But when I was younger, I joined teamwork sports such as baseball or football.
>> For example, taking a walk, riding a bike, and reading books. But when I was younger, I joined team sports, such as baseball or football.
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