Tears of joy.

2021-03-02 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

학생이 쓴 원문

I think that the most precious tears are tears of joy. When someone try to and work hard and achieve something, the tears he has are very beautiful and valuable. Because there is love, forbearance, pain, and hope in the tears. There will be no one who did not experience this. I have sometimes experienced them in my life. The day that I got my Ph.D., and the day I was appointed to school. I can’t forget the moment still now. I had a lot of tears that days.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름] Ha!

I can feel the emotion behind your words.

You did really well in expressing yourself.

Your statements evoked some memories that are really good to look back on.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

I think that the most precious tears are tears of joy.

>> Correct
When someone try to and work hard and achieve something, the tears he has are very beautiful and valuable.

>> When someone tries and works hard and achieves something, the tears he has are very beautiful and valuable.
Because there is love, forbearance, pain, and hope in the tears.

>> It\'s because there is love, forbearance, pain, and hope in the tears.
There will be no one who did not experience this.

>> Correct
I have sometimes experienced them in my life.

>> Correct
The day that I got my Ph.D., and the day I was appointed to school.

>> It was the day that I got my Ph.D., and the day I was appointed to a school.
I can’t forget the moment still now.

>> I can’t forget those moments until now.
I had a lot of tears that days.

>> I had a lot of tears on those days.

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