Tech
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1. How has technology changed your life?
Technology developes rapidly before I know it. It gives me a lot of convenience. Wherever I go, I can find a way with my smart phone as if I am familiar with the whole world. and from drawing, taking photos to studying, so many things can be possible that I couldn\'t even expect before. But I still miss the past. Analogue times. At that time there were sentimental feelings that only analog can give us.
2. Is there a piece of technology that you wish doesn’t exist?
To me, I don\'t think it\'s a good idea to freeze people and unfreeze in the future. I just want people to live their own life faithfully and nobly. And I hope Lives can remain as they are. without losing nature.
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Good evening, Yu [이름]!
Question 2. Is there a piece of technology that you wish doesn’t exist?
Your Answer: To me, I don\'t think it\'s a good idea to freeze people and unfreeze in the future. I just want people to live their own life faithfully and nobly. And I hope Lives can remain as they are. without losing nature.
Happy Monday! Thank you for answering the questions. :)
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Question 1. How has technology changed your life?
Your Answer: Technology developes rapidly before I know it. It gives me a lot of convenience. Wherever I go, I can find a way with my smart phone as if I am familiar with the whole world. From drawing, taking photos to studying, so many things can be made possible that I couldn\'t even expect before. But I still miss the past. Analogue times. At that time there were sentimental feelings that only analog can give us.
Your Answer: Technology developes rapidly before I know it. It gives me a lot of convenience. Wherever I go, I can find a way with my smart phone as if I am familiar with the whole world. From drawing, taking photos to studying, so many things can be made possible that I couldn\'t even expect before. But I still miss the past. Analogue times. At that time there were sentimental feelings that only analog can give us.
>> Technology develops rapidly before we know it. It makes a lot of things convenient. Wherever I go, I can find a way using my smart phone as if I am familiar with the whole world. and from drawing, taking photos to studying, so many things can be made possible that I didn\'t think possible before. But, I still miss the past, the analog times. There are sentimental feelings that only analog can give us.
Question 2. Is there a piece of technology that you wish doesn’t exist?
Your Answer: To me, I don\'t think it\'s a good idea to freeze people and unfreeze in the future. I just want people to live their own life faithfully and nobly. And I hope Lives can remain as they are. without losing nature.
>> To me, I don\'t think it\'s a good idea to freeze people and unfreeze them in the future. I just want people to live their own life faithfully and nobly. I hope lives can remain as they are, without losing our touch with nature.
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts about technology with me. :)
See you later in class!
~Miya^^
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