Technical issue.

2014-04-11 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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Technical issue He said that the gear in the door controller seemed to be worn out. In brief, This machine is out of repair. It can not be repaired. So I highly recommend to replace this machine to new one. There are two gears in this machine. In my opinion, The contact point between two gears seems to be unfixed because of the contact point’s abrasion. I can not understand why we are using repaired PCB. It is unimaginable to use repaired PCB in Korea. We tried to repair PCB before. But, After many trials and errors, we made a conclusion that the usage of assay PCB is better in aspect of economical and safety. Because, Bad PCB can cause another main component such as invertor or other PCB. For example, If we use repaired MCU, it can give the invertor serious damages. Because MCU is connected with invertor directly. Using new PCB is economical than using repaired PCB in the long run

강사 첨삭

Hi there Mr. [Name]!
Well, I can guess that you have another problem with your work.

I hope that you will be able to resolve it as soon as possible.

Good luck!

Enjoy your time this weekend.

Take care!


Always,
Kathrine ^^



Technical issue


 He said that the gear in the door controller seemed to be worn out.

>>   correct!
 In brief, This machine is out of repair.

>>   In conclusion, the machine is out of repair.

 It can not be repaired.

>>  correct!
 So I highly recommend to replace this machine to new one.

>>  So I highly recommend to replace this machine to a new one.
 There are two gears in this machine.

>>  correct!

In my opinion, The contact point between two gears seems to be unfixed because of the contact point’s abrasion.
>>  correct! 
I can not understand why we are using repaired PCB.

>>  correct! 
 It is unimaginable to use repaired PCB in Korea.

>>  correct!

We tried to repair PCB before.

>>  correct! 
 But, After many trials and errors, we made a conclusion that the usage of assay PCB is better in aspect of economical and safety.

>>  But, after many trial and error, we made a conclusion that the usage of assay PCB is better in economical and safety aspect.
 Because, Bad PCB can cause another main component such as invertor or other PCB.

>>  correct! 

>> or: Because, Bad PCB can cause damage to  another main component such as invertor or other PCB.

For example, If we use repaired MCU, it can give the invertor serious damages.

>> For example, If we use repaired MCU, it can seriously damage the invertor.

Because MCU is connected with invertor directly.

>>  Because MCU is connected with the invertor directly.

>> or:  Because MCU is directly connected with the invertor.
 Using new PCB is economical than using repaired PCB in the long run

>>  correct!

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