Technical issue.
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Hi there Mr. [Name]!
Well, I can guess that you have another problem with your work.
I hope that you will be able to resolve it as soon as possible.
Good luck!
Enjoy your time this weekend.
Take care!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
Technical issue
He said that the gear in the door controller seemed to be worn out.
>> correct!
In brief, This machine is out of repair.
>> In conclusion, the machine is out of repair.
It can not be repaired.
>> correct!
So I highly recommend to replace this machine to new one.
>> So I highly recommend to replace this machine to a new one.
There are two gears in this machine.
>> correct!
In my opinion, The contact point between two gears seems to be unfixed because of the contact point’s abrasion.
>> correct!
I can not understand why we are using repaired PCB.
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It is unimaginable to use repaired PCB in Korea.
>> correct!
We tried to repair PCB before.
>> correct!
But, After many trials and errors, we made a conclusion that the usage of assay PCB is better in aspect of economical and safety.
>> But, after many trial and error, we made a conclusion that the usage of assay PCB is better in economical and safety aspect.
Because, Bad PCB can cause another main component such as invertor or other PCB.
>> correct!
>> or: Because, Bad PCB can cause damage to another main component such as invertor or other PCB.
For example, If we use repaired MCU, it can give the invertor serious damages.
>> For example, If we use repaired MCU, it can seriously damage the invertor.
Because MCU is connected with invertor directly.
>> Because MCU is connected with the invertor directly.
>> or: Because MCU is directly connected with the invertor.
Using new PCB is economical than using repaired PCB in the long run
>> correct!
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