Technology can make improve the education. I thnk.
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In my family, my little brother who has married have a son. The son who is attending at elementary school need to carry a i-pad to school to study .
And My hometown has a elementary school that equipped with electronic facilities.
When I was young, all these thing is impossible or not equipped.
Nowadays, I think Technology helps education. I don\'t know the inner curriculum inside the school, but it is often seen to me when I walking around the school.
Thanks for reading.
In my family, my younger brother who has a son attends elementary school and needs to carry an I-pad for his studies.
In my hometown, there is an elementary school that are equipped with electronic facilities.
When I was young, all of these things are impossible/ not yet developed.
But nowadays, technology have been gradually improving and it is a great help to a lot of things. So in my opinion, technology helps education. It makes things easier, simply by just searching information on the internet.
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