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Here are the corrections for the first homework.

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~~Teacher Erine~~

In the past, we had to visit the old market personally to buy stuff to cook, such as meat, fish, vegetables and so on.

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 When I was a child, I remember that my mom took me to old market near my house to buy various kinds of food ingredients once a week.

>>  When I was a child, I remember that my mom took me to an old market near my house to buy various kinds of food ingredients once a week.

And she had to check whether it was fresh or not and haggled & negotiated the price by herself.

>> And she had to check whether it was fresh or not and haggled the price by herself.

When we returned to home, she did her best to cook for the family and served us.

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 However, in these days, as IoT technology is developing increasingly, we lie down on the couch and we can order all kinds of food for delivery by smartphone.

>> However, these days, as IoT technology being developed increasingly, we lie down on the couch and we can order all kinds of food for delivery by smartphone.

Also, watching home shopping ads on TV, we can order food by just a phone call.

>> Also, while watching home shopping ads on TV, we can order food by just a phone call.
 However, sometimes, I miss those days when my mother carefully bought groceries in the old market and served nicely prepared meals for the family

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