Technology is convient for our life.

2018-02-05 · 첨삭 강사 Blair

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Today's voice recording file was not being. Every feedback is listened and read for enhance English. I miss today's recording. I miss it much.. And about Homework, I will answer. Technology is much related to our life. For example, computer and phone is used for my study.. By the way, how have you been? You shall talk about your e-mail address by Monday. I looking forward to it. I want to converse with someone in English. So my English fluency is getting well day by day. Am I too greedy?? And your feedback explanation is very short among teachers who have teached me.. it takes me to read for short time. Thanks for reading.. Keep remind you of telling your email or kakao id..

강사 첨삭

Hello Mr. [이름],

Thanks for doing your homework, and regarding my email address, I\'m afraid it is against the company\'s policy to give our email addresses so as much as I want to, I couldn\'t give it. Also, I couldn\'t get what you meant exactly about the recording file, rest assured I am doing my best to give the feedback in class, also please know that I usually listen to your grammar errors, pronunciation and I correct them immediately, I also recommend better sentences and expressions. Thank you.


And about Homework, I will answer.
Technology is much related to our life. For example, computer and phone is used for my study..


Technology is much related in our lives. In my opinion, technology helps our tasks easier and make our lives convenient. For example, computer and phone could be used in our studies, for instances, we could just easily search something on the internet or simply watch movies and videos that could help us progress more. In terms of communication, we can just easily communicate with our loved ones abroad through social media. Finally, household chores became easier with the help of machines invented through Technology.

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