Technology Is like a Two-sided coin
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I think technology changed many fields.

Also technology changes have been changed not only greet, but also making friends method and making collaboration with worldwide people.


I summarized two pros and two cons by technology changed 
first of pros, I believe the advantages of technology is making easier find friends anywhere.
second of pros, I can chat with my favorite idol on paid apps.(like bubble)


But first of cons is reduce human interaction in person.
second of cons, some of them are not realized when other greet them.
because they are focused in phones.


In conclusion, technology is like a coin.
Because it has pros and cons. 
so I think it is important how we use technology properly on the situation.
강사 첨삭
Hello, So [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. I agree! There are always advantages and disadvantages when we talk about technology, but as you said, it all depends on how we are going to use it.
- T. Caitlyn
I think technology changed many fields.
>> I think technology has changed many fields.
Also technology changes have been changed not only greet, but also making friends method and making collaboration with worldwide people.
Also technology changes have been changed not only greet, but also making friends method and making collaboration with worldwide people.
>> Technology has changed not only the way we greet people, but also the way we make friends and collaborate with people worldwide.
I summarized two pros and two cons by technology changed
I summarized two pros and two cons by technology changed
>> I summarized two pros and two cons of technological changes.
first of pros, I believe the advantages of technology is making easier find friends anywhere.
>> The first advantage is that technology makes it easier to find friends anywhere.
second of pros, I can chat with my favorite idol on paid apps.(like bubble)
>> The second advantage is that I can chat with my favorite idol through paid apps, such as Bubble.
But first of cons is reduce human interaction in person.
But first of cons is reduce human interaction in person.
>> However, the first disadvantage is that it reduces face-to-face human interaction.
second of cons, some of them are not realized when other greet them.
because they are focused in phones.
>> The second disadvantage is that some people do not notice when others greet them because they are focused on their phones.
In conclusion, technology is like a coin.
>> CORRECT
Because it has pros and cons.
Because it has pros and cons.
>>This is because it has both advantages and disadvantages.
so I think it is important how we use technology properly on the situation.
>> Therefore, I think it is important to use technology properly depending on the situation.
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