teenager's cell phone.

Did you have a nice weekend? I was stay home. That is wise way in hot weather. Daegu is famous for hot weather. Young teenager shoudn't have cell phone. It is not needful for them to have cell phone. On the other hand it is useful for high school students. Because they return home late. It is good for they not have occasioned their parents anxiety. But in case of elementary school students is different. They have poor judgment. So they can make big bills. So far as I know most of reason is gossip and mobile toll game.

Hi there  thanks for this well- thought of composition. I had a very great weekend, thanks for asking. Yeah, the summer heat in Daegu must be terrible, huh?  You’re right, I think teenagers must not have cell phones too. Thanks again for writing, and I will see you in class.. =)   Did you have a nice weekend? >>>CorrectI was stay home. >>>I stayed at homeThat is wise way in hot weather. >>> That is a wise way wise /good way to stay away from the hot weather.Daegu is famous for hot weather.>>>CorrectYoung teenager shoudn't have cell phone. >>>Young teenagers shouldn’t have cell phones.It is not needful for them to have cell phone. >>>It is not necessary for then to have cellphones.On the other hand it is useful for high school students. >>>Correct, just add a comma after On the other hand,Because they return home late. >>>Correct >>>Or: Because they go back home late.It is good for they not have occasioned their parents anxiety. >>> It is good for their parents not to worry occasionally.But in case of elementary school students is different. >>>But it is different in the case of Elementary school students.They have poor judgment. >>>CorrectSo they can make big bills. >>>CorrectSo far as I know most of reason is gossip and mobile toll game.>>>As far as I know the main reason is because of gossip and mobile games.