teenagers
학생이 쓴 원문
Teenagers cannot help eating midnight snacks if the current situation does not change.
I think that teenagers who live in Korea are very pitiful.
They don\'t have free time after school.
They are sacrificed for meaningless momorization of knowledge.
강사 첨삭
Great day, Ms. [이름]!
Thank you for this! I guess we cannot change the situation anymore that Korean teenagers need to sacrifice some things to obtain a certain thing but I hope that the government will make a policy to give at least freedom for the students.. but how?? We do not now.
Aki~
Teenagers cannot help eating midnight snacks if the current situation does not change.
>>> CORRECT!
I think that teenagers who live in Korea are very pitiful.
>>> CORRECT!
They don\'t have free time after school.
>>> CORRECT!
They are sacrificed for meaningless momorization of knowledge.
>>> They sacrificed for the meaningless memorization of knowledge.
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