Telephone and E-mail

I disagree with this statment. I think people who use telephone or E-mail get better relationship than people who don't do.I have some reason to support my opinion. First, we can compare people in past with people in present. In the past, we didn't have any means of communication. But communication was part and parcel of relationship. So they used letter. Sending letter took so long time. So people couldn't get along with others well. But now, thanks to telephone and E-mail we can do! Second, Nowadays most of people don't have time to meet friends or family. They are busy because of work or studying and so on. So when we have a little of time, we can call or send E-mail to people who we know. So we can say hello each other and talk about ours interesting subject. I know meeting is best way to get relationship each other. But, we are in the busy world, so we need to find altervative way to contact others.So, I think telephone or E-mail is a quantum leap for communication

Hello [이름], Thank you for your wonderful essay. You were oganized in sharing your thoughts. I look forward to reading more of your compositions. ^^ See you tomorrow! ~ T. Giselle   I disagree with this statment. >> Correct.I think people who use telephone or E-mail get better relationship than people who don\'t do. >> I think people who use the telephone or e-mail have better relationships than people who don\'t. I have some reason to support my opinion. >> I have some reasons to support my opinion.First, we can compare people in past with people in present. >> First, we can compare people in the past from people in the present.In the past, we didn\'t have any means of communication. >> Correct!But communication was part and parcel of relationship. >> But communication is a part and parcel of a relationship.So they used letter.>> So they used letters to communicate. Sending letter took so long time.>> Sending letters take time. So people couldn\'t get along with others well.>> Correct! But now, thanks to telephone and E-mail we can do!>> But now, thanks to the telephone and e-mail, we can easily communicate with others. Second, Nowadays most of people don\'t have time to meet friends or family.>> Second, nowadays most people don\'t have time to meet their friends or family. They are busy because of work or studying and so on.>> Correct! So when we have a little of time, we can call or send E-mail to people who we know. >> So when we do not have enough time, we can call or send e-mails to people we know.So we can say hello each other and talk about ours interesting subject. >> In this way, we can say hello to each other and talk about interesting subjects. I know meeting is best way to get relationship each other.>> I know meeting each other is the best way to start a good relationship. But, we are in the busy world, so we need to find altervative way to contact others. >> But we are in a busy world, so we need to find alternatives on how to contact others. So, I think telephone or E-mail is a quantum leap for communication >> Correct!