Telephones and E-mail have made communication between people less personal.

2015-07-31 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I agree on the statement that telephones and email have made communication between people less personal. Communication via a phone or email has brought significant changes in our daily lives. We can contact our friends and family members anytime and anywhere. They have contributed to the growth of world economy and brought people on the globe much closer. We heavily depend on them to do business these days. We now cannot think of living without them due to their convenience and necessity. Even we can save travel expenses by communicating via phone calls or emails. Despite all of the advantages, there are some disadvantages as well. We sometimes need to meet face to face, so we can understand our partners better and avoid misunderstanding. When communicating with each other, our facial expression, gesture, and voice tone that cannot be replaced by email are so important. So, even these days, we take trouble driving or flying long hours to meet someone in person for an important meeting.

강사 첨삭

T.G.I.F. Sir [이름]!

It\'s the last day of the month.

I want to say thank you for a fantastic month having classes with you.

I am really blessed to have such student like you who is comfortable in sharing your ideas.

I hope that you won\'t stop. ^^ Hope that you will have a great time with your family.

Teacher Nina


I agree on the statement that telephones and email have made communication between people less personal.

>> correct

Communication via a phone or email has brought significant changes in our daily lives.

>> Communication via phone or email has brought significant changes in our daily lives.

We can contact our friends and family members anytime and anywhere.

>> correct

They have contributed to the growth of world economy and brought people on the globe much closer.

>> correct

We heavily depend on them to do business these days.

>> correct

We now cannot think of living without them due to their convenience and necessity.

>> correct

Even we can save travel expenses by communicating via phone calls or emails.

>> We can even save travel expenses by communicating via phone calls or emails.

Despite all of the advantages, there are some disadvantages as well.

>> correct

We sometimes need to meet face to face, so we can understand our partners better and avoid misunderstanding.

>> correct

When communicating with each other, our facial expression, gesture, and voice tone that cannot be replaced by email are so important.

>> correct

>> OR: When communicating with each other, our facial expressions, gestures, and voice tone are so important and can\'t be replaced by email.

So, even these days, we take trouble driving or flying long hours to meet someone in person for an important meeting.

>> So, even these days, we get into some trouble driving or flying long hours to meet someone in person for an important meeting.










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