Teleporting
학생이 쓴 원문
If I can pick a superpower I\'ll choice the teleporting.
I\'m very lazy person. And most lazy moment is morning.
In the moring, when I should be going some where I really really wants to teleporting.
But it\'s only wish.
In reality, I have to take a bus and transfer to subway and walk a lot....
강사 첨삭
Hi Ann:)
Yes, that\'s very convenient. Imagine being in a specific place in just a couple of seconds, right?
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If I can pick a superpower I\'ll choice the teleporting.
>> If I can pick a superpower, I\'ll choose the ability to teleport.
I\'m very lazy person.
>> I\'m a very lazy person.
And most lazy moment is morning.
>> I am the most lazy in the morning.
In the moring, when I should be going some where I really really wants to teleporting.
>> In the morning, when I have to go somewhere, I really want to teleport instead.
But it\'s only wish.\'
>> But it\'s only my dream.
In reality, I have to take a bus and transfer to subway and walk a lot..
>> In reality, I have to take a bus, subway and walk a lot.
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