Television

2015-11-10 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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Television is a fantastic technolgy. I like television because if it's rainy and your bored I can watch television. My favourite movie is titled "Transformer" because the car chane into robots and they fight. I ike to watch fighting movie. My dad enjoy watching news and Bon utimateteam. My sister doesn't like to watch a hororr movie. If you watch tv to much you wil get stupid. So Ionly wattch movies for about two hours. What is you favourite movie?

강사 첨삭

Hi there Min!:) Happy Tuesday to you!   Actually, we have what we call educational programs which facilitate learning in different subjects or categories so watching television does not necessarily make you stupid. It\'s in your own discretion on what to what and what not to watch. Of course you have your parents to guide you on that.   I also like watching television especially series like CSI, 24, and The Walking Dead. I like shows with theme or concept that makes you think. I can say that my favorite movie is 300, a movie about Spartans.   Thank you for this composition, Min. See you in class then.^___^   ~Teacher Mayleen~     Television is a fantastic technolgy. >> Television is a fantastic product of technology. I like television because if it\'s rainy and your bored I can watch television. >> I like watching television especially if it\'s raining outside and you feel bored. My favourite movie is titled \"Transformer\" because the car chane into robots and they fight. >> My favorite movie is \"Transformers\" because the cars transform into robots when they engage into fights. I ike to watch fighting movie. >> I like watching action movies. My dad enjoy watching news and Bon utimateteam. YOU MEAN TO SAY: My dad enjoys watching news and The Bourne Ultimatum. My sister doesn\'t like to watch a hororr movie. >> My sister doesn\'t like to watch horror movies.If you watch tv to much you wil get stupid. >> YOU MEAN TO SAY: If you watch too much of television you might forget about your studies. So Ionly wattch movies for about two hours. >> So I only watch movies for about two hours.What is you favourite movie? >> CORRECT OR: What is your favorite television show?

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