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I totally agree with this opinion that media pay too much attention to the personal lives of celebrities. Every time I turn on the TV it deliver all the useless information of celebrities. However we don't need to know about it. It is just gossip. Sometimes these gossip is useful to talk with unfamiliar person, it help us to do ice-breaking. However for celebrities they don't want to reveal their private life to other person who they don't know. Since sometimes media deliver wrong information about celebrity. So they blamed from most people without reason. Someone can't bare it unfortunately decide to suicide. They also have a right to protect their privacy. That's why I agree with media pay too much attention to the personal lives of celebrities.

Fantastic job [이름]! ^^ You\'re totally right when you said it\'s just gossip and useless information. I mean, why do we need to know how celebrities raise their children, right? ㅋㅋㅋ  Anyway, your sentences are mostly correct, just some forgotten articles like \"the\" and verb tenses. Also, the third and fourth corrections are mainly on articulateness. ^^   Good job all in all. See you in class!   All good things, ==Teacher Charlie==   I totally agree with this opinion that media pay too much attention to the personal lives of celebrities. >> I totally agree with this opinion that the media pays too much attention to the personal lives of celebrities. Every time I turn on the TV it deliver all the useless information of celebrities. However we don\'t need to know about it. >> Useless information about celebrities that we don\'t need to know about is always on TV eveytime I turn it on.    It is just gossip. Sometimes these gossip is useful to talk with unfamiliar person, it help us to do ice-breaking. >> It is just gossip even though gossip is sometimes useful in breaking the ice when talking to an unfamiliar person. However for celebrities they don\'t want to reveal their private life to other person who they don\'t know. Since sometimes media deliver wrong information about celebrity. So they blamed from most people without reason. Someone can\'t bare it unfortunately decide to suicide. >> However, celebrities don\'t want to reveal their private lives to strangers. Especially since the media, sometimes,delivers false information about them that people criticize celebrities wrongfully thus leading to them committing suicide.  They also have a right to protect their privacy.  >> CORRECT   That\'s why I agree with media pay too much attention to the personal lives of celebrities. >> That\'s why I agree that the media pays too much attention to the personal lives of celebrities.