Tell how to discipline an unruly child.
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I want to use sweets.
Because most children loves sweets.
If you can't control your child, parents must make angry.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름] Ho!
Thank you for doing your homework.
Wow! You like sweets?
Me too!! Especially chocolates.
Uhhmmm.. I love them!
Again, thank you, dear.
Keep up the good work.^^
Good night and see you!
~T.May^^
I want to use sweets.
>> WHAT DO YOU MEAN BY: I want to use sweets?
>>YOU MEAN: I want to eat sweets.
Because most children loves sweets.
>> Because most the children love sweets.
If you can\'t control your child, parents must make angry.
>> Parents will be angry if they can\'t control/discipline their child.
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