Tell how to discipline an unruly child. Write at least 5 ways.

2016-03-09 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

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It is very difficult for parents to discipline an unruly child. First of all, I recommend that parents encourage and promote the child to do good. In general unruly child rarely do good. He would like to do something wrong in most case. We must wait for him doing something good. In this case, something good doesn't mean something better than common sense in general people. It means something better than the average level which he does in the daily life. If he win praise by his attitude, he would like to try to improve his attitude. Secondly, parents disregard the mistake and mischief which his son did. Of course, it is possible for him not to know the meaning of his doing. The older he is, the better he know the meaning and good from evil. Thirdly, parents must give an good example to their son. Children become follow the practice and living attitude of his parents unconsciously. Finally, parents haven't to compel the traditional values to him because the social values could change.

강사 첨삭

  Hello [이름]!   Nice try! Some reminders: 1.  Just like subjects and verbs, nouns and pronouns should agree in number within a sentence. example: Parents disregard the mistake and mischief which their son did.   2. He wins praise for his attitude. (Notice the preposition.)   3. In all the perfect tenses the verb \'have\" is used as an auxiliary verb. example: I haven\'t eaten breakfast yet.   Teacher Venus^^   It is very difficult for parents to discipline an unruly child. >>>CORRECT   First of all, I recommend that parents encourage and promote the child to do good. >>>CORRECT   In general unruly child rarely do good. >>>In general, an unruly child rarely does good things.   He would like to do something wrong in most case. >>>He would like to do something wrong in most case.   We must wait for him doing something good. >>>We must wait for him to do something good.   In this case, something good doesn\'t mean something better than common sense in general people. >>>In this case, something good doesn\'t mean something better than common sense for general people.   It means something better than the average level which he does in the daily life. >>>It means something better than the average level which he does in his daily life.   If he win praise by his attitude, he would like to try to improve his attitude. >>>If he wins praise for his attitude, he would like to try to improve his attitude.   Secondly, parents disregard the mistake and mischief which his son did. >>>Secondly, parents disregard the mistake and mischief which their son did.   Of course, it is possible for him not to know the meaning of his doing. >>>CORRECT   The older he is, the better he know the meaning and good from evil. >>>The older he is, the better he distinguishes good from evil.   Thirdly, parents must give an good example to their son. >>>Thirdly, parents must give a good example to their son.   Children become follow the practice and living attitude of his parents unconsciously. >>>Children become follow the practice and living attitude of their parents unconsciously.   Finally, parents haven\'t to compel the traditional values to him because the social values could change. >>>Finally, parents shouldn\'t compel the traditional values to him because the social values could change.

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