Tell me!
학생이 쓴 원문
I feel good when friends tell me their secrets. Because secrets are something that cannot be said lightly, but telling me means that the relationship between me and that friend is very good. Also, such secret stories of friends are very fun and interesting.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
I feel good when friends tell me their secrets.
>>> CORRECT!
Because secrets are something that cannot be said lightly, but telling me means that the relationship between me and that friend is very good.
>>> CORRECT!
Also, such secret stories of friends are very fun and interesting.
>>> CORRECT!
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