Tell me about a challenge or conflict you\'ve faced at work (or school) and how you dealt with it.

2023-12-07 · 첨삭 강사 Jade

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강사 첨삭

Happy Thursday, [이름]. Thanks for this! Excellent work as always. ^_^
~T. Jade^^

After my fresh graduate in college, I worked full-time at my university for two years.

>> After my fresh graduation from college, I worked full-time at my university for two years.

I was nervous because it was my first job, but I still thought I could do it very well. 

>> Correct

However, I realized early on that it was not as easy as it seemed. 

>> Correct

I had to handle multiple calls successively and most of them were from annoy about the professors\' timetable. 

>> I had to handle multiple calls successively, and most of them were about the professor\'s timetable.

Moreover, in order to make a timetable with good conditions for each other, they kept calling to ask for adjustments, and it was difficult to meet all conditions. 

>> Moreover, in order to make a timetable with good conditions for each other, they kept calling to ask for adjustments, and it was difficult to meet all of the conditions.

It was such a stressful job, and I didn\'t know what to do back then. 

>> Correct

But I didn\'t give up that easily. 

>> Correct

After much thought, I decided to confess the situation honestly because there would be no end if I kept meeting the conditions. 

>> After much thought, I decided to address the situation honestly because there would be no end if I kept meeting the conditions.

At the same time, firmly confessed by e-mail that everything was carried out according to the school regulations, and could not meet all the conditions. 

>> At the same time, I firmly conveyed by e-mail that everything was carried out according to the school regulations and I could not meet all the conditions.

Eventually, I was able to manage every timetable on my own. 

>> Correct

Through that situation, I realized back then that making a frank confession and staying calm the best ways to deal with conflicts at work.

>> Through that situation, I realized back then that making a frank confession and staying calm were the best ways to deal with conflicts at work.

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