Tell me about a frightening experience you had when you were young.
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was young, I and relatives on the mother\'s side took a trip.
And at night, all of us took a walk.
My uncle wanted to frighten us, so he hid and popped out.
It was one of the most frightening experience.
My brother was so surprised that he fell backwards.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! :)
And at night, all of us took a walk.
My uncle wanted to frighten us, so he hid and popped out.
It was one of the most frightening experience.
My brother was so surprised that he fell backwards.
Thank you so much for answering your homework.
Have a wonderful day. :)
- Tricia
When I was young, I and relatives on the mother\'s side took a trip.
>> When I was young, my relatives on my mother\'s side and I took a trip.
And at night, all of us took a walk.
>> And all of us took a walk during the night.
My uncle wanted to frighten us, so he hid and popped out.
>> My uncle wanted to frighten us, so he hid somewhere and just jumped behind us.
OR>> >> My uncle wanted to frighten us, so he hid somewhere and just jumped in front us.
It was one of the most frightening experience.
>> It was one of my most frightening experiences.
My brother was so surprised that he fell backwards.
>> CORRECT!
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