Tell me about a place you would like to visit in the future.
학생이 쓴 원문
I would like to visit the Grand Canyon in the future.
Because I saw the post about places to go before death on Facebook.
It has greatness and mystery of nature.
So, after I can speak English fluently, I will go to the Grand Canyon.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! :)
Because I saw the post about places to go before death on Facebook.
It has greatness and mystery of nature.
So, after I can speak English fluently, I will go to the Grand Canyon.
Thank you so much for answering your homework.
Have a wonderful day. :)
- Tricia
I would like to visit the Grand Canyon in the future.
>> CORRECT!
Because I saw the post about places to go before death on Facebook.
>> Because I saw a post about places to go before you die on Facebook.
It has greatness and mystery of nature.
>> It has the greatness and mystery of nature.
So, after I can speak English fluently, I will go to the Grand Canyon.
>> So, when I can already speak in English fluently, I will go to the Grand Canyon.
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