Tell me about a recent high-stress situation you were in. How did you manage it?

2019-09-17 · 첨삭 강사 James

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One of my friend said someting mistakes. So I misunderstood that she didn\'t like me. I really disappointed in her. I normally tell my friends or my mom about my concern. Also, I try to ignore my stress. Then, I go to sleep. These ways make me more relax and comportable.

강사 첨삭

We’re the same me too, I experienced this: )

Sincerely

T. James

Here are my corrections.

One of my friend said someting mistakes.

>>> One of my friends said something mistakes. 

So I misunderstood that she didn\'t like me. 

>>> CORRECT

I really disappointed in her. 

>> I\'m really disappointed in her. 

>>OR: I was really disappointed with her.

I normally tell my friends or my mom about my concern. 

>>> CORRECT

Also, I try to ignore my stress. 

>>> CORRECT

Then, I go to sleep.

>>> CORRECT

These ways make me more relax and comportable.

>>>This way makes me more relax and comfortable.

 


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