Tell me about how people celebrate Valentine\'s day in Korea.
학생이 쓴 원문
Valentine\'s Day in Korea gives chocolate to a man whom women like.
It is a gift for my boyfriend, husband, father, etc.
They write love letters and give him presents with chocolate.
Some woman gives him chocolate with saying love.
Greetings: Ask for directions
J: Hi, Ally. How long has it been?
A: Oh, hi! Long time no see, John?
J: How are you doing?
A: I\'m doing fine. How about you?
J: I\'m fine, where are you going?
A: I\'m on my way to Seoul Station to go to Daejeon.
J: Really? I\'m heading that way too.
A: Where are you going?
J: I\'m going to Kimpo Airport.
A: Then let\'s take the subway together.
J: Of course!
A: Where are you coming from?
J: It\'s just coming from home. How about you?
A: I\'m from the company.
I arrive at Seoul Station.
J: Well, I\'ll go for the KTX bullet train this way!
A: Yes, I\'m going to the airport railroad platform! It was nice to see you!
J: And you too. I\'ll call you next time, let\'s eat together!
A: Yes, call
강사 첨삭
I am so proud of your progress, John. ^^
Happy weekend.
~t. Ally
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Valentine\'s Day in Korea gives chocolate to a man whom women like.
>> On Valentine\'s day in Korea, women give chocolates to the men they like.
It is a gift for my boyfriend, husband, father, etc.
>> It\'s a gift for their boyfriend, husband, father, etc.
They write love letters and give him presents with chocolate.
>> CORRECT!
Some woman gives him chocolate with saying love.
>> Some women give chocolates as a sign of love.
Greetings: Ask for direction:
J: Hi, Ally. How long has it been?
A: Oh, hi! Long time no see, John.
J: How are you doing?
A: I\'m doing fine. How about you?
J: I\'m fine, where are you going?
A: I\'m on my way to Seoul Station to go to Daejeon.
J: Really? I\'m heading that way too.
A: Where are you going?
J: I\'m going to Kimpo Airport.
A: Then let\'s take the subway together.
J: Of course!
A: Where are you coming from?
J: I\'m coming from home. How about you?
A: I came from my company.
I arrive at Seoul Station.
J: Well, I\'ll go for the KTX bullet train this way!
A: Yes, I\'m going to the airport railroad platform! It was nice to see you!
J: And you too. I\'ll call you next time, let\'s eat together!
A: Yes, call me.
>> On Valentine\'s day in Korea, women give chocolates to the men they like.
It is a gift for my boyfriend, husband, father, etc.
>> It\'s a gift for their boyfriend, husband, father, etc.
They write love letters and give him presents with chocolate.
>> CORRECT!
Some woman gives him chocolate with saying love.
>> Some women give chocolates as a sign of love.
Greetings: Ask for direction:
J: Hi, Ally. How long has it been?
A: Oh, hi! Long time no see, John.
J: How are you doing?
A: I\'m doing fine. How about you?
J: I\'m fine, where are you going?
A: I\'m on my way to Seoul Station to go to Daejeon.
J: Really? I\'m heading that way too.
A: Where are you going?
J: I\'m going to Kimpo Airport.
A: Then let\'s take the subway together.
J: Of course!
A: Where are you coming from?
J: I\'m coming from home. How about you?
A: I came from my company.
I arrive at Seoul Station.
J: Well, I\'ll go for the KTX bullet train this way!
A: Yes, I\'m going to the airport railroad platform! It was nice to see you!
J: And you too. I\'ll call you next time, let\'s eat together!
A: Yes, call me.
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