Tell me about Korea Memorial day
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In Korea Memorial day, we celebrate people who sacrificed in lives for country. In every Korea Memorial day, we hang flag outside to commemorate them. In addition, at 9:00 a.m. when siren comes out, we should pray silently and show our real respects to them. In TV programs, president and many politicians encourage people to think about people who struggled for protecting country and independence.
I think, we always have to remember their noble sacrifice.
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In Korea Memorial day, we celebrate people who sacrificed in lives for country.
>>Memorial Day in Korea celebrates those who sacrificed their lives for their country.
In every Korea Memorial day, we hang flag outside to commemorate them.
>>Every year on Memorial Day, we raise our national flag outside to celebrate them.
In addition, at 9:00 a.m. when siren comes out, we should pray silently and show our real respects to them.
>>From 9 a.m. when the siren comes out, you should pray quietly and pay your respects sincerely.
In TV programs, president and many politicians encourage people to think about people who struggled for protecting country and independence.
>>In TV programs, the president and many politicians encourage people to think about people who struggled to protect their country and independence.
I think, we always have to remember their noble sacrifice.
>>I think, we always have to remember their noble sacrifices.
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