Tell me about one of the happiest memories from your childhood using 7 sentences.
학생이 쓴 원문
Tell me about one of the happiest memories from your childhood using 7 sentences.
There is a small mountain in the back of the town where I used to live as a child.
There is a lawn in the middle of the east of the mountain and a thick forest around it.
The neighborhood kids always got together on this lawn when they had time to spare.
We played a game divided into two teams
They decorated their heads and bodies like soldiers with sticks and leaves, and played war games and surrendered their opponents with strength like wrestling.
It is one of the happiest memories of my childhood.
강사 첨삭
Hi, John. ^^
There is a lawn in the middle of the east of the mountain and a thick forest around it.
The neighborhood kids always got together on this lawn when they had time to spare.
We played a game divided into two teams.
They decorated their heads and bodies like soldiers with sticks and leaves, and played war games and surrendered their opponents with strength like wrestling.
It is one of the happiest memories of my childhood.
I am imagining your childhood memories, and I think it\'s truly beautiful. ^^
Thank you for sharing this with me.
~t. Ally
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There is a small mountain in the back of the town where I used to live as a child.
>> There is a small mountain at the back of the town where I used to live as a child.
There is a lawn in the middle of the east of the mountain and a thick forest around it.
>> CORRECT!
The neighborhood kids always got together on this lawn when they had time to spare.
>> CORRECT!
We played a game divided into two teams.
>> CORRECT!
They decorated their heads and bodies like soldiers with sticks and leaves, and played war games and surrendered their opponents with strength like wrestling.
>> They decorated their heads and bodies like soldiers with sticks and leaves, and played war games and surrendered to their opponents with strength like wrestling.
It is one of the happiest memories of my childhood.
>> CORRECT!
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