Tell me about something you made from scratch.
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was in elementary school, I made some cookies from scratch.
Because I took an afterschool class about English in vacation.
And the last day of the class, we made some cookies for a farewell party.
It was my first time to make cookies from scratch but it was quite delicious.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! :)
Because I took an afterschool class about English in vacation.
And the last day of the class, we made some cookies for a farewell party
It was my first time to make cookies from scratch but it was quite delicious.
Thank you so much for answering your homework.
Have a wonderful day. :)
- Tricia
When I was in elementary school, I made some cookies from scratch.
>> CORRECT!
Because I took an afterschool class about English in vacation.
>> Because I took an after-school class in English on vacation.
And the last day of the class, we made some cookies for a farewell party
>> CORRECT!
It was my first time to make cookies from scratch but it was quite delicious.
>> It was my first time making cookies from scratch but it was quite delicious.
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