tell me about the best advice you got from a friend.
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Did you already have lunch JM? If so, I hope you enjoyed it.
Anyway, thanks for writing this. I agree with you. Sometimes it makes us feel better to have someone listen to our stories. ^^
Talk to you tomorrow!
~Teacher Shanee^^,
When I have some concerns about my work, life and future, I frequently meet a friend to share my stories.
>>> Correct!
At that time, He just listen to long story without his opinions and advice.
>>> During that time, he just listens to my long story without giving his opinions or advice.
He make me tell all of things.
>>> He makes me tell all of things.
During talking my stories, My concerns disappear.
>>> When I share my stories, all of my worries disappear.
because It help me to organaze how can I do and find what should i do.
>>> Talking to a friend helps me compose myself and think of some ways to overcome challenges.
Eventhough I spend money for him in the pub or cafe, Releasing stress was attributed to his actions.
>>> Even though I spend money on him in a pub or café, I don\'t [이름]d because I am able to relieve my stress.
Thesedays I just think that listening of opponent stories is better than giving a advice.
>>> These days, I just think that just listening to someone is better than giving advice.
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