Tell me about the first time you went to the movie theater?
학생이 쓴 원문
I went to movie theater when I was going to watch Frozen 2.
I was very feeling great. And movie was also fun! But it was the first and last day that I went to movie theater.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next week! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
I went to movie theater when I was going to watch Frozen 2.
>>> I went to the movie theater to watch Frozen 2.
I was very feeling great.
>>> I felt great.
OR>>> It was a great feeling.
And movie was also fun!
>>> And the movie was also fun.
But it was the first and last day that I went to movie theater.
>>> But it was the first and last day that I went to the movie theater.
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