Tell me about the proper way of taking care of our skin
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The most important thing is to keep skin moist and avoid from sun. you have to put on moisture or nurishing cream every day and night. Also you should apply sun protector before you go outside.
If you have acne on your skin, don\'t touch it with your hands. If you want to pop it, do it with clean cotton swab. Then never let it under the sunlight. It may cause pigmentation.
If you care about wrinkles around your eyes or mouth, put on the cream thickly where you worry about. I use vaseline to prevent the wrinkles.
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The most important thing is to keep skin moist and avoid from sun.
>> When taking care of our skin, the most important thing to do is to keep our skin moisturised and avoid being exposed from the sun.
you have to put on moisture or nurishing cream every day and night.
>> You have to put moisturiser or nourishing cream every day and every night.
Also you should apply sun protector before you go outside.
>> Also, you should apply sun protector before you go outside.
If you have acne on your skin, don\'t touch it with your hands.
>> Correct
If you want to pop it, do it with clean cotton swab.
>> Correct
Then never let it under the sunlight. It may cause pigmentation.
>> Then, never expose it under the sunlight because it may cause pigmentation.
If you care about wrinkles around your eyes or mouth, put on the cream thickly where you worry about.
>> If you worry about the wrinkles around your eyes and mouth, put a thick amount of cream on the area where you have wrinkles.
I use vaseline to prevent the wrinkles.
>> Correct
>> Correct
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