Tell me about you wish have never happen.
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name].
I did not understand your question.
I think your subjection is tell my wish to you.
My wish is to be a reporter.
When I was a child, I watched a man on TV.
He always spoke a news everyday on TV.
So, my wish was a reporter.
As far as I know, many people like him.
But I failed to pass to go the major in university.
So I gave up my wish.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! :)
I think your subjection is tell my wish to you.
My wish is to be a reporter.
When I was a child, I watched a man on TV.
He always spoke a news everyday on TV.
So, my wish was a reporter.
As far as I know, many people like him.
But I failed to pass to go the major in university.
So I gave up my wish.
I appreciate your effort in writing a composition.
Have a wonderful day. :)
- Tricia
Dear [Name].
I did not understand your question.
I did not understand your question.
>> CORRECT!
I think your subjection is tell my wish to you.
>> I think you want me to tell you my wish.
My wish is to be a reporter.
>> CORRECT!
When I was a child, I watched a man on TV.
>> When I was a child, I used t watched a male reporter on TV.
He always spoke a news everyday on TV.
>> He always talks about the news on TV.
So, my wish was a reporter.
>> So, I wished to be a reporter like him.
As far as I know, many people like him.
>> CORRECT!
But I failed to pass to go the major in university.
>> But I failed to pass that major in the university.
So I gave up my wish.
>> So, I gave up on my wish.
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