Tell me about your family?
학생이 쓴 원문
Tell me about your family?
My family was father, mother and younger sister. my sister is a year yonger than me.
but she early married than other same age groups and already gave birth two daughters. (presently she is 26.) so our family is totally 7.
my cousins are very cute and lovely. they do sometimes cute things to me.
my father has made his business related to antique funiture for 7years. he is very diligent. he is loving for jogging every morning.
he has never been relinquish his exercising in morings. i 've been respecting his aspect of deligence.
my mother is president of primary/elemantary school. she has been gave a recpect by others.
because my mother is elemantary teacher i was going to school with my mother together. there was a humorous thing.
a classs teacher of my sister is her(our) mother.
when mother asked my sister why didn't homework? in class, she said 'mother make me do not homework' at that time.
she was mischievous.
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]!
I really enjoyed reading your composition.
I can say that you have a wonderful family.
You must be very lucky to have your family members.
So, treasure them!
Anyway, have a fabulous night.
Rest well.
-Teacher Chloe
Tell me about your family?
>>Correct!My family was father, mother and younger sister.
>>My family is consists of my father, my mother, me, and my younger sister.
my sister is a year yonger than me.
>>My sister is a one year younger than me.
>>My sister is a year younger thanme. but she early married than other same age groups and already gave birth two daughters.
>>She is already married and has two daughters.
(presently she is 26.)
>>She is now 26 years old.
so our family is totally 7.
>>We are already seven in our family. my cousins are very cute and lovely.
>>My cousins are very cute and lovely.
they do sometimes cute things to me.
>>Sometimes, they do cute things to me. my father has made his business related to antique funiture for 7years.
>>My father is a businessman. He has his own business with antique furniture for seven years now.
he is very diligent.
>>He is very diligent.
he is loving for jogging every morning.
>>He loves jogging every morning.he has never been relinquish his exercising in morings.
>>He never skipped jogging every morning.
>>He never relinquished jogging every morning.
i \'ve been respecting his aspect of deligence.
>>I have been respecting his diligence. my mother is president of primary/elemantary school.
>>My mother is an Elementary school principal.
she has been gave a recpect by others.
>>She is respected by others. because my mother is elemantary teacher i was going to school with my mother together.
>>Because my mother is an elementary scool principal, I used to go to with school with her.
there was a humorous thing.
>>There is something funny.a classs teacher of my sister is her(our) mother. >>My mother was my younger sister\'s teacher.
when mother asked my sister why didn\'t homework? in class, she said \'mother make me do not homework\' at that time.
>>When my mother asked my sister about her homework she used to say \"Mother, you did not help me do my homework\". she was mischievous.
>>Correct!
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