Tell me about your favorite food.
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My favourite food is Korean traditional food, like Kimchi soup, Korean pizza-Bindaedduck, and Jjajangmyeon....
>> My favourite food is Korean traditional food, like Kimchi soup, Korean pizza-Bindaedduck, and Jjajangmyeon.
I live in Australia\\\'s region(the countryside), so I haven\\\'t got Korean food. Here haven\\\'t Korean food market and restaurants.
>> I live in Australia\'s countryside, so I haven\'t eaten any Korean food yet, nor visit a Korean food market and restaurants.
Here\\\'s only placed Asian food market and other Asian restaurants(Thi, Chinese...)
>> The only Asian restaurant available are Thai and Chinese restaurants.
That\\\'s why when I go to big city(like Sydney..) I always buy much Korean food.
>> That\'s why when I go to the big cities like Sydney, I always buy a lot of Korean food.
My husband also Korean so we love to Korean food.
>> My husband is also a Korean, so we both love Korean food.
It\\\'s expensive but we thanks about we can buy it here.
>> It\'s expensive, but we\'re thankful because we can buy it here.
Also I like beef steak and pasta too. The Australia is famous of beef. It is good for me.
>> Also, I like beef steak and pasta too. The Australia is famous for beef and it is good to me.
It\\\'s cheaper than Korea and the quality is normally better.
>> It\'s cheaper than the beef and pasta in Korea and the quality is better.
But it\\\'s very difficult for us what a find good quality restaurant, because I live in region(countryside).
>> But it\'s very difficult for us to find a good quality restaurant, because we live in the countryside.
I\'ve became hungry, because I wrote about favourite food.
>> Now, I feel hungry because I\'m talking about my favorite foods.
I should have to eat something now. Thank you.
>> I should eat something now. Thank you!
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